Cultural Narrative

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In class we are learning about fairytales and what they used to be. We watched the 101 Arabian nights movie. Then we got to make something that showed our learning like drawing a picture or making clay figures. We got to pick any story that we wanted. I picked drawing something that would represent the story that people would know.

Five Nights at Freddy's

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In fairy tales we are working on our final project. I am in the part were I am drawing things on it to make it more amazing I drew my own cover. Then have to proof read it make sure there aren't any wrong words and everything is fine. I went with Five Night at Freddy's to retell throughout all the games and added some books in with most the ideas mine.  

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Pacifica art

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In class we have been working on pacifica art for our passion project. We drew design we liked then picked a couple and put them together after that we have to pick our final design then we get a little bit of tapa clothes to see if the paint would bleed through the clothes and what paintbrush worked best with the clothe. Then we sketched the work out on it after we had to paint it I really like painting the tapa clothe. After we needed up ink rolling something we liked then put a design on it. when done we got to do rainbow art which was my favorite out of everything.

Five night of freddys

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In class we are doing our final work post it on our blog then pick a place or format to post it as i'm going to put mine in a book form.

Five nights at Freddy's.

The aftons are a normal family at first glance but once you know their secret they seem like people from another place. William is a businessman who loves building animatronics. His wife Clara, who he has loved since high school, have three kids together. Micheal, their oldest son who is part of the tormentors, a group of 4 kids with the original mask Micheal as foxy, Bonnie, Chica, and Freddy. Then there is Elizabeth the 2nd youngest she loves ice cream then there Christopha which has two nicknames C.C or Chris Micheal keeps bullying him because William pays no attention to him and only C.C and Elizabeth. But they were always happy about each other then one day Clara lost control of the car and went off a cliff. William was so sad he blamed Michael and beat him on every single day if anything happened it was Micheal fault but Elizabeth thought William loved him more so she got him in trouble for more stuff when it was her fault then Micheal took all the anger out on C.C by scaring him with the tormentors. William has told him over and over to leave his brother alone but this was the only way to get attention out of William so he would do it even if he got hit. There was a big party with a kid named Tim he had it in the party room and everyone was there but William he was in the bunny suit known as Springtrap he would ask kid if they wanted to see the animatronics being built they said yea then never came back he got 5 kids stuffed them in the original 5 when the party was over. Their souls now possess the suits and at night they move, waiting for William to kill him. C.C was having a party but the tormentors had a plan to shove C.C in the Fredbear's mouth not thinking it would hurt him but when it happened the mouth springlocked on him and bite off his frontal lobe and killed him on impact now with the death of two family members William only cared about Elizabeth but he had more sinsters plan with her. The sisters location was getting new members to the crew Circus baby the new funtime Elizabeth loved her and when Circus baby oftered her ice cream she took it but the animatronic opened up and stuffed her in the suit leaving no trace but the icecream on the floor. William watched on the carmas smiling how it worked then deleted the evidence, Micheal was scared he lost his sister in this place and he knew father had something to do with it. He got home and William got out the bat and hit Micheal on the arm, snapping it he did the same but to his forearm snapping that his arm was broken but Micheal was happy William said more than 8 words to him but then passed out from the pain. When he woke it was dark in the room knowing that he was left to die if it had happened but it never does. He hobbled to his room then put on a long sleeve to take a walk outside still thinking about how William said two words to him. He went to find work and that was at the Sisters location where his sister had died but he didn't know that he got hired. First day and it was putting the name on it then it glitched out and Eggs Benedict came on screen. He was walking around doing checks then he was dragged to a dark room with no noise when there was noise it said “Scooper is going in 3 2 1 BANG” the scooper went and took all his organs out Ennard who was meant to be a funtime but they never ended up finishing him took Michael and slid in the big hole and moved his body to get away from the sisters location. He woke up and was shocked because he was still alive which made no sense to him but went home and his father was not there but a note was left on the fringe that said”Micheal when you come back home I won't be there because i'm working overtime at the freddy's pizzeria and won't be back for a long time and don't think I care about you because I wrote you a note”. When William came back he was shocked to find Michael passed out on the floor with wire hanging out of him but when he looked closer he knew who the wire belonged to. William was sad because he built another animatronics to kill Michael now he won't be able to use it. When he got back the souls to the first five ended up scaring William to his suit which he got in to scare the souls but the suit springlocked and killed him. Micheal found out about all the mess that his father did and said it was time to put an end to this and burnt all the places down and let the souls go but Micheal never got a normal life from there his friends ended up in animatronics somehow but they were dead and michael had lived about 90 year now but he can't die.

Rewriting The Old Man and his Grandson

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In fairy tales people we are re writing a Grimms stories of our choice I chose The Old Man and his Grandson. I really like this book.

In a far way village live a wife, child, husband and his father. The father who was really old couldn't hold up his spoon to eat and he spilt it everywhere on the table cloth so kicked him to the floor were a patch of dirt was so when his food fell on the ground it would saock into the ground. There he was trying to eat some chicken in the broth but his wobbly hand drop the spoon which landed on the side of the bowl knocking it over. The little Grandson would try and help him but his parent would scold him telling him to stay away so he had to. One night the old man was sitting in his corner he looked at the happy family while the mum fed the son and tear were let out he was really sad and hungry. 

One day the family was out and about they were getting everyone new bowls and spoons the kid grabbed the old man a bowl it was really small the parent were shocked how they were treating the old man so they sat him at the table every night and didn't get mad at him for spilling food Johnny the kid was really happy seeing that he was treating him fairly but he passed away not to long after they were all sad the husband had been the most beauce that was his dad didn't get to treat him that good. Years had passed the parent had gotten old and spilt there food everything the old man did so he treated them the same because you can never feel the true pain until you in there shoes.

Johnny had his family of one kid and a wife he told her everything his parent did and she was shocked how could someone do that to their own family and she understood what her husband was doing but she still felt bad. One day his parent told him about how sorry they were sorry after that he let them sit at the table and live the rest of their life until they passed a year later. When the funeral happen he put the bowls on the headstone then walked away with a small tear escaping his left eye.

In this story I changed most of it because the kid told his parents that it was a small bowl then they take him to that table and take care of him. I changed the fact that his parent died, and they locked away the parent giving his parent the same treatment as the old man.

Cinderella

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Class today we are all rewriting Cinderella. we can add thing or make them different as long as you can tell it is Cinderella.

Once a upon a time there was a little kid born in the hand of her kind mother but she passed away when having her. The father took her couple years later he found a another wife who raised her with the other kid but then the father died while out riding his horse. When the step mother found out she blamed Cinderella and then started treating her different from the two step sisters. It has been years since she has trapped to be a maid at there house doing the: cooking, laundry, feeding animals, and dusting. She was out on a ride on her fathers horses that she was given and meet a lovely man who was also on his she made small talk and she loved him but did not know who he was. She was home dusting then the step sisters ran past with yelling then the step mum came out and explain that it was to a royal ball being held by the king to find his sun a bride. They were getting ready when Cinderella ask to go her mother said no.

They had left while Cinderella cried about not being able to go to the ball but there was a kind  women who came to her then handed her a beautiful dress heels and pearl necklace. Off she went to the ball with a charges and her horse leading the way they made it and when she enter all eye look at her she walked past then the prince found her and danced with her the hole night but she wanted to leave to make it back before her sister that were fuming with rage. When she got away her heel left her foot and she didn't look back for it. The night was over and the sister heard he was looking for someone to fit the shoe so they took knives and cut there heels to shape also there two were off then wrap it in cloths to stop the bleeding. Cinderella was locked in the basement when they arrived but one of the sister bowed to the prince then fainted from the loss of blood.

Cinderella was banging on the floor above her hoping someone will help but they didn't hear her yet. The prince put the slipper on her foot and it had fit he was so happy by her face didn't look anything like her. Then one of the guards heard the voice and banging from the basement and ask to look there then the sister that had the shoe fell faint they took the shoe and noticed blood they unwrapped it to fine no toes and half her heel was gone so they knew she wasn't the right one. When they took off to the basement there was Cinderella once she had the slipper on he was happy about it then he took her to the kingdom they got married and lived happily ever after.

Rapunzel

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In class we are reading a Rapunzel story of our choice then answer some questions of fairy tales. 

why do you think texts change overtime,I think so it was more subtle with what chilern were able to read or better punctuation.

How come each version we have read of Rapunzel is different, even though they have been written by the same authors? To have a different ending from the last or experimenting with what people may like better.

What was the same or different in the two versions you read? In the two I have read a prince come to save her from the evil lady but in the other there is more problems to get her when she get relocated and the prince is blind.