On a sunday night it was dark and cloudy. Tom was roasting marshmallows for a treat.
Meanwhile... a sea monster named Fred was told to stay still and he was hungry. Then he smelled something yummy so he went to see what was yummy.
and he begged Tom for a marshmallow and he looked at Fred and he pulled the marshmallow out of Tom's hand. After Fred got the marshmallow in his mouth the marshmallows went crunch crunch as the marshmallow melted in fred's mouth it was watery. When he had seen the marshmallow he took it with his tongue and then he wanted more then he had ever had he liked marshmallow fred had lots of marshmallow fred was a cute monster tom was scared fred stole the marshmallow
He was being cute tom gave Fred a marshmallow
Fred smiled at tom BY MIKAYLA
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