I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi my name is Mikayla and I like animals my favourite big cat is a snow leopard and I love playing lion tag my favourite food is fish and I like helping animals and I dont like cooked veg and my sister is annoying when I grow up I want to help animals.
Hey Mikayla, Miss M here. I really like the way that you have told us your favourite food. I am wondering how you like the fish? In sushi? Fried? Fresh? With chips? Next time make sure that you have full stops at the end of every idea.
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Hey Mikayla, Miss M here. I really like the way that you have told us your favourite food. I am wondering how you like the fish? In sushi? Fried? Fresh? With chips? Next time make sure that you have full stops at the end of every idea.
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