I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi my name is Zoe and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. It made me think all about animals. Next tine maybe you could change the colour of the text because sometimes I couldn't read the text and also next time you could try and make the background not so distracting. If you would like to see some of my learning you can go to wpszoes.school.nz
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Hi My Ethan From Blaketown School but next time fix your writing.
ReplyDeletehi my name is Emily and I am from Blake town school I love how you did this presentation I love Animals. good job.
ReplyDeleteHi Mikayla my Name is Caitlin i'm From blake town school, I like your slideshow about Animals
ReplyDeleteGood job .
Hi my name is Zoe and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. It made me think all about animals. Next tine maybe you could change the colour of the text because sometimes I couldn't read the text and also next time you could try and make the background not so distracting. If you would like to see some of my learning you can go to wpszoes.school.nz
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