I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Mikayla. Its me Nevaeh from Te Rōpū Whakamanawa. And I think you did a good job finding those photos A great description of what we do in kiwi can maybe next time you should but more photos of as to show what we do at kiwi can. bye for Now
Kia ora Mikiayla it is Lacie from gilberthorpe school. great work on this but the top writing does not really make much sense when you said very team we do the funniest things in the world Kiwi can no game can beat this. Did you think about this before you writ it?
Kia ora Mikayla A from Te Rōpū Whakamanawa! I like how you posted about Kiwi can! Next time you could have some capitals! Its cool how you found a photo of another class. From Keisha
Kia ora Mikayla A, Mikayla here. This is good, and I like the pictures, but I think your writing needs more sentences, fullstops and commas. And maybe you could put more pictures. Anyway, Blog you later! From Mikayla.
Hi,Mikayla Riley here I remember this it was funny because boys say the boys are better than girls but the girls won lol well some boys say that I think. well bye.
hi friend i am linny from gilberthorpe school it was looking at your picture's in kiwi can did you enjoy and i can't see you in this pictures next time when you go to kiwi can you i will see you in 1 picture or maybe 2 or 3 see yoy next time
Kia ora Mikiayla it is from gilberthorpe school. great work on this but the top writing does not really make much sense when you said very team we do the funniest things in the world Kiwi can no game can beat this. Did you think about this before you writ it?
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Kia ora Mikayla. Its me Nevaeh from Te Rōpū Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteAnd I think you did a good job finding those photos
A great description of what we do in kiwi can maybe next time you should but more photos of as to show what we do at kiwi can. bye for Now
Kia ora Mikiayla it is Lacie from gilberthorpe school. great work on this but the top writing does not really make much sense when you said very team we do the funniest things in the world Kiwi can no game can beat this. Did you think about this before you writ it?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mikayla A from Te Rōpū Whakamanawa!
ReplyDeleteI like how you posted about Kiwi can!
Next time you could have some capitals!
Its cool how you found a photo of another class.
From Keisha
Hi this is Angus Here and I like the way you did a pitcher of the kiwi can. BLOG YOU LATER !!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mikayla A, Mikayla here. This is good, and I like the pictures, but I think your writing needs more sentences, fullstops and commas. And maybe you could put more pictures. Anyway, Blog you later!
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Hi,Mikayla Riley here I remember this it was funny because boys say the boys are better than girls but the girls won lol well some boys say that I think. well bye.
ReplyDeletehi Mikayla i enjoyed the part when you bid that Kiwi Can for
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hi friend i am linny from gilberthorpe school it was looking at your picture's in kiwi can did you enjoy and i can't see you in this pictures next time when you go to kiwi can you i will see you in 1 picture or maybe 2 or 3 see yoy next time
ReplyDeletehi its levi whats up
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mikiayla it is from gilberthorpe school. great work on this but the top writing does not really make much sense when you said very team we do the funniest things in the world Kiwi can no game can beat this. Did you think about this before you writ it?
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