I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Mikayla, I am a year six student from Paihia School. I really liked your blog post about your writing. It was cool how you added what animals need to survive. Did you know that my favorite type of writing is a narrative too. Keep up the good work. Next time you can maybe reread your work out loud. Yours faithfully Liam.
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Kia ora Mikayla,
ReplyDeleteI am a year six student from Paihia School. I really liked your blog post about your writing. It was cool how you added what animals need to survive. Did you know that my favorite type of writing is a narrative too.
Keep up the good work. Next time you can maybe reread your work out loud.
Yours faithfully Liam.