I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey there, I'm Bailey.A from Gilberthopes school I really think this is an AMAZING! peace of work, But next time you could maybe improve by putting white in the sky, or maybe around the moon for clouds.
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and it;s not that easy doing it but I persevered.
hello Mikayla it is Elijescha from Rata. I like the moon hanging up on top of the river.
ReplyDeleteHey there, I'm Bailey.A from Gilberthopes school I really think this is an AMAZING! peace of work, But next time you could maybe improve by putting white in the sky, or maybe around the moon for clouds.
ReplyDeleteHi Mikayla it me again your buddy blog.
ReplyDeleteI realy like this art.It looks like the moon it under the water.
When did you done that?