I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hiya Mikayla, this is really good and I like how you had an introduction, you had one and I didn't, I forgot, hahaha, anyway, you did awesome! good job Mikayla, From Mikayla K
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hiya Mikayla, this is really good and I like how you had an introduction, you had one and I didn't, I forgot, hahaha, anyway, you did awesome! good job Mikayla,
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Thank you I am going to look at yours bye
DeleteHi kaunteya here. I like your poem but maybe you could tell us a bit more of what you were learning about. Bye.
ReplyDeleteok i will good bye!
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