I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Mikayla, I LOVE this movie that you have created. The thing that I like the most is that you made every single detail yourself, you have been very creative and innovative in how you designed the animals. Another detail I like is that you were very real and included the mother cat catching a bird to feed her kitten, tau kē! (awesome) Next time you could add more detail in your writing and perhaps talk about your favorite part or how you came up with your ideas. Keep up the awesome work Mikayla! Whaea Raewyn
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Kia ora Mikayla, I LOVE this movie that you have created. The thing that I like the most is that you made every single detail yourself, you have been very creative and innovative in how you designed the animals. Another detail I like is that you were very real and included the mother cat catching a bird to feed her kitten, tau kē! (awesome)
ReplyDeleteNext time you could add more detail in your writing and perhaps talk about your favorite part or how you came up with your ideas. Keep up the awesome work Mikayla! Whaea Raewyn