Narrative writing

 Hello people,

Today in class I have gotten my friend my writhing so she could tell me what number I am at she put me down as a four for both of them.My writing it about kids wanting there fathers to get  along and one other person helps them by kidnapping and then helps them work together.

Helping  a friend

The water was glittering and the stars were bright. The ocean was quiet for once. When the mood was right they would come out of there homes for there annual party.The kids both looked alike but they were from two different places,they have spectacularly wavy hair and freaky blue eyes.

No one watched the kids. They were fine watching television. They were just some kids that loved staying home by them self they liked playing with each other but they weren't allowed by the two kings themself then.The cat ate popcorn after one of them fell asleep.

Burtort kidnapped her and it was all planned but they wanted to have fun about it so it went down as a normal kidnap,Then they went to get Shelly the other kid.Shelly had forgotten the plan and screamed to her dad and they heard him raging so they made it fast.They had to explain it to Shelly then she got it all but ally was having fun eating the food (20 minutes later) the still couldn't find them and they were getting more worried by the minute.They ran to each other and blamed them over and over.

Nothing they could do except  to work together they did and got nowhere because they kept  fighting. But they put their heads together and they were nowhere a place where someone could keep them from the sunken shipwreck. They told there fathers about the all and they built a hole friendship.Burtort was an undercover spy