Cinderella

Hello people,

Class today we are all rewriting Cinderella. we can add thing or make them different as long as you can tell it is Cinderella.

Once a upon a time there was a little kid born in the hand of her kind mother but she passed away when having her. The father took her couple years later he found a another wife who raised her with the other kid but then the father died while out riding his horse. When the step mother found out she blamed Cinderella and then started treating her different from the two step sisters. It has been years since she has trapped to be a maid at there house doing the: cooking, laundry, feeding animals, and dusting. She was out on a ride on her fathers horses that she was given and meet a lovely man who was also on his she made small talk and she loved him but did not know who he was. She was home dusting then the step sisters ran past with yelling then the step mum came out and explain that it was to a royal ball being held by the king to find his sun a bride. They were getting ready when Cinderella ask to go her mother said no.

They had left while Cinderella cried about not being able to go to the ball but there was a kind  women who came to her then handed her a beautiful dress heels and pearl necklace. Off she went to the ball with a charges and her horse leading the way they made it and when she enter all eye look at her she walked past then the prince found her and danced with her the hole night but she wanted to leave to make it back before her sister that were fuming with rage. When she got away her heel left her foot and she didn't look back for it. The night was over and the sister heard he was looking for someone to fit the shoe so they took knives and cut there heels to shape also there two were off then wrap it in cloths to stop the bleeding. Cinderella was locked in the basement when they arrived but one of the sister bowed to the prince then fainted from the loss of blood.

Cinderella was banging on the floor above her hoping someone will help but they didn't hear her yet. The prince put the slipper on her foot and it had fit he was so happy by her face didn't look anything like her. Then one of the guards heard the voice and banging from the basement and ask to look there then the sister that had the shoe fell faint they took the shoe and noticed blood they unwrapped it to fine no toes and half her heel was gone so they knew she wasn't the right one. When they took off to the basement there was Cinderella once she had the slipper on he was happy about it then he took her to the kingdom they got married and lived happily ever after.