Rewriting The Old Man and his Grandson

Hello people,

In fairy tales people we are re writing a Grimms stories of our choice I chose The Old Man and his Grandson. I really like this book.

In a far way village live a wife, child, husband and his father. The father who was really old couldn't hold up his spoon to eat and he spilt it everywhere on the table cloth so kicked him to the floor were a patch of dirt was so when his food fell on the ground it would saock into the ground. There he was trying to eat some chicken in the broth but his wobbly hand drop the spoon which landed on the side of the bowl knocking it over. The little Grandson would try and help him but his parent would scold him telling him to stay away so he had to. One night the old man was sitting in his corner he looked at the happy family while the mum fed the son and tear were let out he was really sad and hungry. 

One day the family was out and about they were getting everyone new bowls and spoons the kid grabbed the old man a bowl it was really small the parent were shocked how they were treating the old man so they sat him at the table every night and didn't get mad at him for spilling food Johnny the kid was really happy seeing that he was treating him fairly but he passed away not to long after they were all sad the husband had been the most beauce that was his dad didn't get to treat him that good. Years had passed the parent had gotten old and spilt there food everything the old man did so he treated them the same because you can never feel the true pain until you in there shoes.

Johnny had his family of one kid and a wife he told her everything his parent did and she was shocked how could someone do that to their own family and she understood what her husband was doing but she still felt bad. One day his parent told him about how sorry they were sorry after that he let them sit at the table and live the rest of their life until they passed a year later. When the funeral happen he put the bowls on the headstone then walked away with a small tear escaping his left eye.

In this story I changed most of it because the kid told his parents that it was a small bowl then they take him to that table and take care of him. I changed the fact that his parent died, and they locked away the parent giving his parent the same treatment as the old man.